Get a life you Newgrounds Nerd
There's no such thing as a winnable war. It's a lie we don't believe any more.
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GOD, MAYBE I SHOULD GROW THE FUCK UP WHILE I'M AT IT!
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DEATH CAB OF DOOM
BAH BAH DA DUM.
Quite a intriguing story there. How you doing?
I'm doing fine thanks. Having writers block mostly and using small bursts of imagination and motivation to write something. What about you?
Fart cum and apple sauce on my ass lips
Looks like this a job for Mr Scrubba!
I lol'd.
Haha, death dreams.
Overall the style of writing is very nice and definitely a strength of yours, however, the plot itself is quite confusing in places. Despite some confusing parts, I understood it slightly better the second time reading through and enjoyed it more.
Thank you. It was meant to be sort of dream-like story so it allowed a little lee-way to be a little confusing. Thanks about the compliment about my style of writing.
DevourerJay
if you wrote 4 short stories that could be linked... would that make it a regulare story?
Lost-Chances
Yes. Although I don't see how I've written four short stories that could be linked.