It's good, I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Excellent character.
There's no such thing as a winnable war. It's a lie we don't believe any more.
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Thank you. No idea if I will carry on, but you never know. I shouldn't promise something will carry on because the likely hood is, it wouldn't. You never know though.
Is this the whole thing, or just the intro chapter?
This is chapter 2. Tally Ho! is chapter one. There may be a chapter 3, or maybe not.
oh, guess i'd better read 1 then.
Indeed, but I'm not sure it'll help you much.
I love you too.
Get fucked. Don't steal my signature faggot.
Dude, seriously. Calm down. Stop spazzing my man. Fuck it was funny and didnt have a name. I considered it a bandwagon.
It's not a bandwagon, it's my fucking signature. The worse part is, you likely don't get half the joke. You only get the fact that a random kid, who you don't know, said to someone, who you're not sure who, to make their brother fight his dog.
Correction: ginger rat-ass brother. Get bent faggot. I was gonna try and reason with you because I could see why you'd be pissed, but now I can see you're just a fucking loser that spazzes at everything that doesn't go his way without trying to talk with the guy first. Fuck you, man. I might just use the sig to piss you off.
Go die.
Oh well done, you've really offended me! My problem is when people jump on a joke without getting the punch line. You don't even know who I quoted (which, for your information, is not me). I've tried the talking approach many times and believe me, it works about 5% of the time. I'd rather be an arrogant annoyed shit-head than to be kind to idiots.
When you earn my respect, then I talk. Until then, I'm going to insult you for every minor mistake just like every other fucker.
Lost-Wisdom
You write very detailed but enjoyable reads. Silent Hill theme in piano is great as well.
Lost-Chances
Thanks a load. I didn't plan to write another chapter with this character (previous chapter being Tally Ho!) but I don't know. I wanted to write something and felt like using the same character and building him up a bit. I'm glad some people enjoy it otherwise I may as well write the stories in my head.
Again, thank you for reading it and commenting.