I prefer ending 1. It's the most evil.
There's no such thing as a winnable war. It's a lie we don't believe any more.
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Each ending has it's own form of evilness.
I'm glad we've had this delightful chat, good sir.
Any reason at all? Last time I checked, you were having a paddy.
I really enjoyed this story, there was something about it that kept me hooked the whole way through. Personally I'd say that ending one should be the only ending there, ending 2 just makes it too far fetched and fantasy-like. Ending one was quite creepy and rounded off the story in a good yet sinister way.
Overall, good job and a worthy read.
I put both endings mostly because I couldn't decide which one to use and decided to allow the reader to choose whatever ending he/she preferred. Some people like darker horror-like stuff, some like well...It's hard to describe ending A.
Pasty-Flawss
You totally stole mai user picture idea.
Lost-Chances
OH NOEZ!