¨I dragged myself to the pavement and my arse, checked the back of my head and saw some blood.¨
Should that be ´on my arse´ or do i just not get that sentence?
There's no such thing as a winnable war. It's a lie we don't believe any more.
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I was hoping it would be understood but I'll change it to clarify it.
Great story, nice to see that you're writing has been improving each time you create a new story.
By the way, the header, profile image and icon fit well. Nice job on that.
Haha, thanks a ton. IFUN made the header, profile image and icon. The story is for the monthly contest although I was planning to write something for St Valentines anyway.
Normally this sort of story wouldn't appeal to me as much as other genres but I kept reading through to the end and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your writing flows very well and it kept me hooked, I actually want to find out what happened after the story.
Good job man and good luck with the contest.
Thanks a ton for the support. If you are interested in other stories, just check out my news history and you'll find some (including a small little series). I hope I do get at least mentioned but then again, I'm happy to just write.
I forget. What's a pom?
In what context?
Amy is a bitch. A cold, cold bitch - in a week, really? Seems she likes playing Musical Penis'.
Oh yes, she's a famous player of the flute.
I er...
in the context of your signature?
Go check Urban Dictionary or Dictionary for the word "pommie".
Urbandictionary is jewish and deceitful. You, however, are a complete stranger and thus a trustworthy source of information on all subjects.
I agree. I'm still not going to say a word.
skarai
I don't know. Felt uninteresting. I have a sort of theory or thought of mine.
Which goes to, it's easy to make some epic tale about something and make it exciting right? It's hard to make something simple and make it work.
Example, I heard a song about a guy carrying a stick which was... Great!
So in this one, nothing really happened. So it's no fun to read or such.
Maybe in context it would work, but we all work different anyway.
What do I know
Lost-Chances
Hhhmmm, I'll try to see what I can do but the helpful hint is a little general.