I sat in the chair with my eyes closed <insert comma here> thinking
is good bro
There's no such thing as a winnable war. It's a lie we don't believe any more.
Age 33, Male
Student
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Joined on 6/19/04
I sat in the chair with my eyes closed <insert comma here> thinking
is good bro
Thanks, missing the comma in the first sentence is pretty nit picking though.
Lost-Wisdom
Damn, good story. Very well thought out. I think I've said this before. But any chance you'll be a writer?
I'll buy your book, I would.
Lost-Chances
Well, I was advised to submit something to a writing magazine of some kind. I've just yet to write something which I feel strongly is a good story and to find a magazine that would do it in England.
Thanks for the response though.