Hey that's not bad, though I hate reading long stories in front of the computer.
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Thanks for the compliment.
really well written have you thought of writing a full length horror story?
Nope, surprisingly.
I didn't read the whole thing im too lazy..but poor mr stevens
Mr Stevens deserved it because you couldn't be fucked to read it all.
TheTest
That was good.
I mean, I really dislike walls of text but this one was worth reading.
I've actually been typing up a book recently. It seems great for a short story,
but could be filled a little more if you want it to be really interesting, like include more setting and character development. But yeah, you should keep typing.
Really creative ^3^
Lost-Chances
Thanks for the input. I'll keep it in mind.